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These days a large amount of food is transported large distances before it is consumed?What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend

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General Statement

Nowadays, food production has shattered the borderlines between the countries; that is your food supply is being prepared all around the world.

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Therefore, every food supply has to bear a tedious journey before it settles a consumer's kitchen.

Outline

While, there are some pros and cons to this process which will be considered in the following paragraphs.

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Main Idea

Firstly, this large population on this green planet must be fed in a proper manner, making it mandatory for the nutrients to be delivered from every corner of the globe.

Example

As an illustration, one will not forget the excruciating pain suffered by the people in Ethiopia of the 20th century which was inflicted upon them because of the mere fact the grain could not be provided to them from other fertile lands.

Explanation

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Result

This example clearly shows that the availiblity of food stock from other parts of the world is a merit, making it hard to overlook.

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Main Idea

On the other hand, there is a downside to this issue: Some nations become complacent by the easy delivery of the bread to their country's footstep.

Example

To put some light on it, UAE can be pointed out. Their rich has empowered them to get the caviar on their tables by making a single demand over it.

Explanation

This easy process has pulled the wool over their eyes, and they can barely see a future when their desires are not fulfilled - the very mistake that may make them needy and dependent in the future to come.

Result

As a result it is not clever to overlook the shortcomings of the easy globalized food preparation SCAM.

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Summary

To sum up, there are both some benefits and some hassles, to be considered, over the issue of sending food merchandize over an extended destination.

Thesis Statement

Nevertheless, communities have to be vigilant enough to see the pitfalls as well as the convenience of getting their protein from other territories.

Final Remark

In retrospect, nations should have unveiled some gimmicks into supplying their own mouthful not to have the predicaments they are going through today.